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for Oncoming Train

by scyllablue

schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I like how you brought Spike and Xander into it and gave them something more then donut boy and big bad. You gave a different spin on an old idea. I hope you update anytime, sometime.
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ABSOFREAKINLUTELY love this! I can't wait to read more by you. I hope you plan on continueing this story and soon! Please, if it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you e-mail me when you update? dueljewel18@yahoo.com
person Genna
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your style of story telling is crisp. Upon reading the summary, my mind could not wrap around Riley and Angel. It felt wrong.

The way you wrote them + how you told the story makes me think, why couldn't I imagine this possibility before. You made it feel natural and right. It is the mark of a brilliant writer.

Good job.
person purrfus
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a pairing I had ever considered, but what a rush. I followed the links from your Harry Potter, and I am really glad I did. Can't wait to see the rest.
person Sir Magus
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story so much!!! xanderxspikexrileyxangel are so fuckin hott!!! i luv the pairings and of course the group sex scene!! i cant wait till u post the next chapter i hope u do it soon(HINT!HINT!)!! hey do u think that they could pull Graham into their little luv rectangle thingy for at least a good fuck b4 tossin him? sry fantasies are hard to control sometimes! keep up the good work k?
person CC
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TGIFAFTROCF - loosely translated: Thank God it's Friday and for the Return of Commando Finn!
person Alice
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Yay for Riley causing a stunned silence. Are you going to deal with Spike's jealousy, or will he just accept it as part of Xander? Very yummy chapters! And I'm glad that Riley isn't nutty anymore, although I thought it was funny when he got all Dru.
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter, can't wait to see what Riley wants Angel to do with that plug. Please don't take so long between updates. You're driving the little cat batty.
person krimson
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see Riley coming back into himself. He had become a bit of an object there for a bit, and I was missing the supersoldier who gave Angel a run for his money on the practice mats, both physically and emotionally Angel's near match. Still really loving the sweet relationship between Ri and Xander. Thanks for a great chapter.
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great smut. Now let's see if they can get a quicky in before the meeting. *snerk*