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by norwalker

person Emanuel
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, this one I love! It's a shame I didn't read these two in the right order. Endings is good, but it makes even more sense if you've read this before. Isn't it great when you don't have to be PC and always let the good guys win? How much more fun would season 3 have been if it had had THIS, your, ending?! As I've said in an other review: it doesn't get any better than femslash pairings with BDSM aspects to it! So much fun... :-)
person me
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooooooo!i loved it!
person pureevil230
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soo hot. i hope you write more about thier adventures or something. talk about her training just write more!
person Queen Zulu
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on characterization. *eyebrows*

Your POV shifts from first person/second person to first person/third person. I think the story would be stronger if you chose one or the other.