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by spikesbint

person becky
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute!
person Lady Brandywyne
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was beautifully done. You managed to capture the depression that goes along with the loss of a child (shutting people out, feeling alone in your grief) but managed not to let it overwhelm the point of the story. Their reunion (while I wish it was longer, talking and explainations, and well, the sex too.) was just the right micture of love, forgiveness and understanding. I really enjoyed this story and for a short piece it was wonderfully done. Good luck on your next project. I'll be looking for it.
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. Sneaky sneaky. More please.
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful.
person ace
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Keep it up! Thank you!!!
person aliciaspiked
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last chapter. Was sorry to see it end. It was hot and touching, brought tears to my eyes. Thanks so much for writing it!
person Kate
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! This was a great Valentine's day story. A fab combination of sex and sweetness. A pleasure to read and the ending brought a huge smile to my face. Thanks!
person becky
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story cant wait to read more!
person anon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz continue, nice to see you writing some spuffy again! :p
person Gansey
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much. More please!