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for This Girl, That Boy

by facingthesun

person Emma
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The little kids are so cute, and I love finding out more about how they came to be where they are now. Please post some more soon, this is great!
person Azrielle
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. I need to know what happened. More please.
person Jenn
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aother wonderful chapter, thank you! I was so happy to see you updated :)
person Jenn
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I really like the flashbacks and the personalities you wrote for the different people in the story. I love it!!!!
person Scarlet Ibis
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Looking forward to an update. And hey- am I the first reviewer? Yippeee!
person Jenn
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful, I adore the flashbacks they are so cute. I really love this so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person mikeygs
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I really liked the first chapter. Cute and funny, yet bittersweet when intertwined with the present tense storyline. Can't wait for more.