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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh ive had a similar experience when i was 18 and living at home yikes it sucked! thank God im an adult now!!! very good chappie and very real too! great job as always!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I can tell we're moving towards something here! I know I've said it before, but I just adore the way you use flashbacks to show the couple's history. It's adorable and intruiging and I'm glad you posted another chapter, because I'm going away for spring break and won't be able to check on updates for almost two weeks from today. I hope there's another chapter or so up by then!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I love this fic of yours, it's very cute with all the flashbacks revealing more about the happy days of their relationship and what they want to get back to. I really want to find out what split them up and why William didn't come back for Joyce and what'll happen next and.... well, just keep writing, I want to find all of it out.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter, I loved Joyce. She made me laugh and all her rules amused me. I think I nearly died when William said he loved Buffy. All the UST is wonderful, I really loved the part where they were in bed. Please update asap!
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story is so cute!! wonder what made them break up :S
thanx so much for this story...hope you update soon
thanx so much for this story...hope you update soon
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the combination of the flashback and present scenes. Perfectly done teenage love.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was a cute chapter. I loved all the kissing and how William told Buffy he loved her. I'm glad they are finally going to work things out. I can't wait to read more, update soon please!!!!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is such a great story i really hope there is more to it!
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW that was adorable, William is soo cute and I like how you wrote Buffy! I loved this chapter so much!
Buffy fell back on the grass, not caring about her dress. She gasped for air and her eyes watered due to her laughter. ?You?re the biggest girl ever! Kissing on a Ferris wheel at night with twinkling lights and pretty music?you?re such a girl!?
Haha!! That was great and the part where she asked him if that's what he was thinking about when. . .yeah. I was rolling on the floor laughing, very nice!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Buffy fell back on the grass, not caring about her dress. She gasped for air and her eyes watered due to her laughter. ?You?re the biggest girl ever! Kissing on a Ferris wheel at night with twinkling lights and pretty music?you?re such a girl!?
Haha!! That was great and the part where she asked him if that's what he was thinking about when. . .yeah. I was rolling on the floor laughing, very nice!! I can't wait to see what happens next!