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for This Girl, That Boy

by facingthesun

person Aisling
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im glad he's not mopey LOL :D :D more soon yummy want cake!!!! oooh i have some, i have two beat that! :P
person Jenn
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last two chapters, they were wonderful, sweet and very sexy. I can't waitto read more, this story is amazing and it gets better with every chapter!
person Kimber
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great interplay with flashback and reality.......such a strong love they have and failed to see....but are one of the luckiest to have a second chance......
person Emma
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Extreme cuteness, but of course not sickeningly cotton candy sweet and fluffy either. It's like sour cotton candy! Still a bit of left-over angst, but good happy fluffy stuff to come (or more angst, whatever). Anyway, enough candy analogies (I don't have any more easter candy, so my mind is taking it's own turns) and I wish I had some, but great fic, and amazingly cute backstory flashbacks.
person Mariana
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! is one of my favourites!!! i love how realistic it is and how cute and witty...
thanx so much
hope you update soon, it was wonderful!
person Jenn
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, I loved it! I enjoy how you put just a bit of everything, love, romance, past, sex and humor. It's perfect and also one of my favorite stories, I can't wait to read the next part.
person Mariana
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! awesome work!!
thanx so much for it
hope you update soon
person Aisling
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv it huni :D :D more soon xxx
person deliverance
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good please update soon.
person shelly
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the flashbacks! and i'm super curious to find out what went wrong and why he would cheat on her!