rate_review Reviews

I love it. Please Update!!!

What can I say? I love what you write. I may not have reviewed your stuff before but that's, er...it has a valid reason. I'll think of it somewhen soon.

But until then...I like. Your use of the Mary Sue again taken to, well...to wonderfulness, basically. Which is really abstract and not a very good point to make in this manner but it's a point, surely?

Oh, and playing around with canon...your metafictional aspects of the story definetly add to the whole thing. After all, who wouldn't make comments about writing a character in such and such a way? Aheh. And the lack of pop culture references from Buffy is, well...inetresting. Sorta shifitng that role onto other characters...

And, yes, a very good first seven chapters. I look forward to you writing more...what with this story kicking various degrees of butt, and so on and so forth.

:-/ your going on my stawking list until you get back to this story and finnish it. :P

Woo hoo! God, I love this storyline! Mozell gets Xander, right? I'm also hoping for some Ethan/Giles. Giles really needs to get laid. But good story, love it!

*LMFAO* Sorry just imagining the future chaos. This is a very, very good premise, and I can't wait for more. I wonder who Ms. Mozeby will be romanced by... Judging by her statement of how she isn't ever followed around by wide-eyed mooning young me, I'm voting for Xander, because, well, Xander rocks. But I'll read this regardless of the pairing. Hmmm... brit. lit. calls.

Oh my goodness, I like this story of yours. I really hope you write more as I thought the first part was delightful.