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by addielogan

person Ella
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm still reading!!!
person Amy
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear those two....... *sigh* A good ol' fashioned shag-fest is definately needed to make things all good and stuff between them again!! Yup, definately thing so! I love this story and can't wait for you to update again!!
person vsnj
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue ASAP! I'm really enjoying this and can't wait for a new chapter.
person jane
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I think Buffy did more thinking in this chapter than she did in the entire series. I'm on the edge of my seat with anticipation.
person slayerspet
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good...I cant wait for another update.
person Scarlet Ibis
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"My biggest problem now has been keeping Angel's little blue friend busy." I had major gutter brain on that sentence... And I get Buffy and Spike's responses, and even Angel's [forgot he was human for a day], but now I don't get Willow's. But I suppose her's over view on the Spike/Buffy relationship from before could be a toss up...
person jane
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I stand corrected and accept I've probably been a bit harsh on Buffy. I wonder If the other Scoobies feel like Willow. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
person ScreamingFlamingos
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I love it! Although I was surprised at Willow's reaction about Spike and Buffy - but I guess I shouldn't be - Buffy's "friends" weren't all that observant of her. Loved Illyria and the Rubik's cube part! I was giggling when Willow said she hadn't gotten to putting it in her mouth. I would love to see more Illyria in your story for I just love her! If you can, that is, add more of her into the story - but not just for comic relief - Illyria made some good observations and opinions.

It is a slow-paced story, and I'm ansy to get to the part where Buffy and Spike FINALLY have the "us" talk, but I understand why it is slow, and I can wait to get to the 'good stuff' ;-) Just don't make us wait too long! :-) See, what we need is for a giant hand to come out of now-where and whack both Buffy and Spike upside the head to knock some sense into them!!!! :-)

I can't wait for more. You are doing a fantastic job so far!
person Kate
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is progressing so well! This lastest chapter (7) really resonated with me emotionally, especially on Buffy's behalf. Her frustration at her own feelings, Willow's words and Angel's words and actions came through loud and clear and had me feeling as frustrated as Buffy. I was glad she set things straight with Willow and yelled at Angel because A) it's nice to see her finally standing up for herself with regards to her personal life and b) if she hadn't yelled, I would've had to have gone and thrown something in my apartment. lol This chapter worked so well to get across Buffy's situation at the moment and all the emotions and thoughts she is expriencing. Dying to know how all of this is going to play out.
person CC
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool!