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Sweet chappie B/S have changed alot since Sunnyhell but somethings stay the same.

Well excuse me!!!!! Your right you shouldnt have to waste half your update explaining your story to people,BUT, dont bitch about the very people you then ask to review your story at the end. If all you want are good reviews dont write the bloody stories. I like this fic but feel I have been wrapped over the knuckles for even having an opinion about it so how about this...I simply wont read it then I wont risk offending YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am really enjoying the story as it unfolds.

I like the fact that you are taking your time
developing th relationship between Buffy and Spike.

I hope you have a happy ending planned for the two of
them.

Keep up the great job and I look forward to reading more.

Ignore the critics, Addie. If they want this story a particular way, they can write one themselves. I love your Buffy and Spike, even without the words and the deeds, you can feel their love in their every action. They are taking it slow, and that's great. Both were hurt by S6, and they've done a lot of growing up since the fall of Sunnydale. I also love what you're doing to Angel. He made decisions that changed the lives of his friends and his son, and his actions were very selfish. I don't think the ramifications were fully explored in S5. They were getting there at the end, but you've taken in a step further. I like it. Keep up the good work.

Great story - I feel my heart breaking just a little but I have faith in the lovers and in you. Wonderful writing - so glad I found this gem.

Grrr! Let's get them together soon, shall we???? I do like the story, and I think that it is very well written, but I can't help feeling like you're stringing us along, dragging this out as long as possible. I don't think that's your plan - at least I hope not! :-) But in all fairness, you're gonna have to give me something more spuffy-like in order to keep me interested in your story. At this point, there doesn't seem to be an end in sight. I feel that Buffy and Spike are just dancing around the issue, and I can't wait for one of them to get fed up with all the avoidance and just start talking!

I hate to leave a negative review, but I just want to help make the story better. I do like this story, and you have something great here. So sorry for all the negativity!

Thank God I'm not the only one that wondered why Spike could love Buffy without a soul and Angel couldn't. The fact that Spike did proved to me that he really loved her.

I have to say I'm really enjoying this story. I think your characterizations are right on and I love the different dialogues you have going. I especially enjoyed the whole part about Illyria and the Rubiks cube.
So many stories these days don't bother with any kind of plot development because they are too busy trying to get to the hot make up scene. I think your story is great because of the build up and the fact you don't have all the problems from the past magically disappear. We get to see their fears and insecurities and that makes them more real and your story is that much better for it.
Please don't listen to anyone who thinks you are just dragging this out. They don't understand what makes a good story and would probably be better off sticking with PWP instead of insulting good authors with their 'help'.
Please keep up the great writing. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Update good. Very, very good.

Please keep Buffy and Spike together please don't separate them pleeeeeeaaaaasssseee dpn't separate them.