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by addielogan

person Brunettepet
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great, schmaltzy ending to your well thought out and realized story. I really enjoyed Buffy's rejoinder to Angel's "I thought you'd always be my girl" in the last chapter. It put absolute closure to their romance. This story was engrossing, entertaining and emotionally fulfilling. You did a great job with Spike and Buffy's voices and actions, always keeping them in character. Thanks for the entertaining read, I loof forward to the sequels.
person Pet
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really thought that was beautiful...from start to finish. The build-up was nice, the smut was wonderful. :)

The way you word things....Spike's feelings how he's never have Buffy, it made my heart hurt. Sign of a good writer there. Keep at it! Awesome work.
person jane
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this fic lovely ending.
person Amanda
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! So sad to see it end, sequeals please. ^_^
person timeofchange
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Very sweet, and I'm looking forward to the sequel
person Amanda
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, sad to hear it's gonna end soon.
person jane
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya spuffy and lots of it knew it would be worth the wait.
person Mole
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the chap, though it's really sad to hear that this fic is coming to an end, but still, I'm looking forward to whatever is coming.
person obsessed
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've liked it, for the most part (though I always felt that the whole "misunderstanding" plot line was a little frustrating....but it makes for story extension)
I particularly like your statement in the last chapter though "I'm a woman"....Buffy the woman would never have loved Broody Angel...he was for the romantic girl.
He never saw her as she truly was.

Good oh.
person MarzBar
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next/last chapter even though I will miss this story. I have enjoyed reading about an intelligent Buffy.