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by addielogan

person vsnj
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Please keep up the good work. I don't hate Angel but I really like when Spike finally gets a reward before Angel. I feel that Spike just follows his heart and does what is right unlike Angel where he feels he should get rewarded.
person Katt
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this...you are an elegant writer, please keep up with it, I always wondered how Buffy and Spike would handle a relationship after all that went down, and I'm really liking your version. Thanx for the pleasure.
person Lucysky
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this story!! I love how Spike and Buffy are acting around each other, unsure but hopeful. I'm also really curios about what's going on with Cordelia. Can't wait for more!! Please review soon!!
person Kate
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Re: Chapter 6 - I like that things aren't happening easily between Spike and Buffy. Of course there are intense feelings, but there is that bit of awkwardness and sense of "what do we do now?" Makes what's happening that more real and true. The Cordy-Angel scene was awesome too. You made some excellent points, through Cordy, about Angel and his mission and the choices he has made over the years. I also like the Buffy remember about her team...shows how she is growing as a leader.
person Jane
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Buffy needs a bit of competition> As things stand she@s got Spike hanging out to dry> When she found him he was suicidal> Yet all she talked about was how upset she and Dawn were that he didn@t contact them>> She hasn@t considered how deeply her affair with the immortal hurt spike> Or that now she has a choice she@s rejected him again> Poor Spikes still supposed to dance attendance on her @till she jets off> I think she takes his love for granted> She needs to realize he@s got options too now> he@s young gorgeous loyal brave and has super powers> He should be fighting the girls off with a stick>
person slayerspet
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I love this story. I bet absolutely everyone who reads this has nothing but good things to say about it; how could they not? Anyway..I cant wait for more of this story..I will be waiting on pins and needles for another chapter or two or three..LOL, but seriously..well I am serious!!!! More please ..this is so good. I have not felt this way about a story in a long while. Good Job!!!!
person Scarlet Ibis
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Knew I was right about his senses...
person Scarlet Ibis
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey-

You mentioned in chapter one that there were several key episodes you hadn't seen before writing this fic, and I was just wondering if you had seen all of Angel's season five. I know you're not character bashing, but I don't think that Angel would be that broken up about Spike being made human. He did just hours before sign his probability of being "the one" away [though it wasn't his full name, and it could be ripped off the prophecy anyway...]. Anyway, the whole Spike/Angel relationship had evolved at that point [for the better], and I was just wondering...

Also, you said Spike could hear Buffy's heart beat and that her smell was just as strong. Did he retain some of his vampiric powers? All in all, still enjoying and reading.
person rachel
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like where this story is going and the pace is just fine with me. cant wait till the next update.
person lucysky
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I'm glad that you're giving the it a solid plot. Don't get me wrong I still love PWP but sometimes it's good to read a story that's really well developed!! With that said please continue the I can't wait to see what happens next.