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for Broken

by AEM

person victoria davis
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i beg u to keep writting this i love it so far i wanna see what eles u have up ur sleeve!!! i love this fanfic
person Doug
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I came across this last night/ day before? something like that. Stayed up after 1:00 this morning to finish after getting off work. So a few comments.

Another Buffy-Faith fic. Which I don't have a problem with except...

Having exposed us to Mr. AND Mrs. Spencer, I feel a little cheated. Why? With your story as a basis... THEY STILL NEED TO BE PUNISHED!!! And in part 4 Buffy asked for anything that could send her out east. With fire in her blood? I wonder why. So Faith has brothers. Everyone has to choose where to draw the line as to what counts for family and what family counts for. With that in mind, I think the gang can and will open the group to Ty, Xander could always use another good hand on a worksite, but how far will Faith go as regards Cooper. He'd be what, 9..10, something like that, having grown up in the only family he does remember. Or did the family he has now make sure he knows he is loved but is adopted, like I was. He has family now, does he know he has a brother and sister out there somewhere? So both Ty and Faith have choices to make.
Overall, thanks.
person blu
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god this story's great...i loved how the relationship of faith and buffy evolved in this story.....more please.....
person michelle
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was really really good. The author must make more story of this pair. Igive this a big fat five. This is really good
person phoenixJay27
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another good fic.
u realize that joss gave out faiths last name awhile ago and its Lehane
umm in the begining there should have been more to get over than quick forgiveness
should have been reasoning for her coming back.
anyways its cute and nice to read. update ur other fic soon
person allie
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was one of the best chapters i have read in this story and it was beautiful done. and i cant wait for the next chapter and the next. the scene were buffys dad is being an asswhole is perfect when giles comes in and says that buffy is his daughter. i loved that scene and the whole thing. i cant wait for your next chapter and stories to come. please update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.
person M Kennedy
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SAAAWeet deal. It waas a great chapter. Really captured the love the two of them share. Can't wait to see the next. PS you really have a knack for writing.
person greens
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beuatiful.. romantic & sexy. great job.
person Carolee
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice . . . .sweet, but with enough angst that you don't really miss the sex. Okay, that's a lie. Enough that I'm willing to wait for it, cause I believe it will be good? I'm enjoying the series and hoping for more.
person greens
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Verry romantic & sweet. I am glad that Faith got the job. I loved the humor w/ the other 2 creepy gym teachers. I look forward to more.