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for Lick the Pavement

by iceprincess060882

person Tahmoe
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After reading "Breaking The Girl" I had to check out your other stuff. I've so many versions of the "Smashed" episode and this by far was
one of the best. I hope you post more stories. Your style of writing is very similar to mine. I truly believe if you're going to write a sex scene
why hold back. I like to place the reader in the room with them. Looking forward to reading some of your other stuff.
person triss
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool story, too bad it's just pwp i wish it could develop some plot hehe
person Rana
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice. very hot and in canon! great job!