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for Pursuits of Happiness

by facingthesun

person jillij ( too lazy to sign in )
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you! You stopped it just when it was going to get really good. Plus I need to know what happens when he truns back to Spike. Do you ever finish any of your stories?

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person tasha
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont think u understand how much i love this fic. therefore you should update quickly to keep me happy
person Jenn
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh how wonderful! I liked the trip to the zoo, very cute. I love this story, you write William & Buffy's personalities very well. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Brunettepet
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this premise and you're doing a good job with a blushing, but enamored William. His acceptance of everything is a bit far fetched, but it's all in the name of romance and is very entertaining. Elizabeth doesn't add much to the mix other than being the vehicle that brought William and Buffy together. I hope she and Drusilla get more to do in future chapters. Altogether, this is entertaining and I'm enjoying the setting and William's reactions to all the new things. His observations at the zoo were charming, especially with Buffy blithely filling him in on her Sunnydale misadventures with all sorts of creatures - hilarious!
person Kary
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. one question though, are you gonna let us use are imaginations, or spell it out for us? lol. i LOVE the fluffiness, and i can't wait till next update!!!! ^_^
person tasha
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my goddess!! this is the sweetest fic eva!!!
person Jenn
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sweet! I really enjoyed this chapter, you did a great job. I liked their little outing, very fun. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Jane
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really really sweet. William's so adorable. Glad to see the Watcher's loosening up. I'd love to see Giles' face.
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! It is amazing and I love how you write William & Buffy. The whole idea was brilliant! I hope yo update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.

"?Alright, but when the month comes to a close you may want to put him back on the couch, I?d hate for you to wake up with Spike in your bed,? Elizabeth replied with a smirk." --- Very interesting idea, I wonder what would happen.
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ummmm more pleaseeeeeee