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by Vulnerable

schedule September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh please Please PLEASE tell me you're still working on this? ~clasps hands together and bats eyes~
person Alice
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell happened to Angel? Did I miss something? When was he dusted? Or did I just forget? I forget things. But I remembered this fic. Very cool, and I'm glad there's more. Please update soon!
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Update soon please. It's hard to keep track of a story when you take so long between updates.
person TheShadowCat
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So a bunch of soldiers dyed, hm? What color? Oh, you mean 'died' as in 'to perish.' And I find it a little hard to believe that Jake was shacking. Shaking, yes, shacking, no.

Sorry, just a bit of nit picking there. I know all about the old spell checker missing correctly spelled words improperly used. Proofreading helps.

Ok, onto the good news. Great chapter, don't take so long in updating.
person Alice
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! To borrow a term from Jay and silent Bob, you made with the love. I can't help it, I love the dynamic you created between Dru and Oz. Very nice.
person anubiset
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been very bad. I didn`t know you had more chapters. I have been working on my groups. I now own three and mod for beta group for this site. I am a very busy camper. I am also looking into getting an online, at home job with e-bay, if they ever send the info. I am also writing again. For this fandom. I have 1 and half pages and it looks to be a fairly short story, so far. I don`t know yet. It is coming to me in pieces. Once it is finished and my beta`s, mom and my friend, have gone over it, I hope to post it here and also on a couple of sites and to my one group.
This story is taking a whole lot of turns that I didn`t see. I am glad. It keeps us readers guessing. And you did that whole evil cliff-hanger on this one too. Can`t wait to find out who is at the door. I still can`t get over Angel being dust. I guess L.A. is champion-less. (Is that a word?) Oh, I love how Spike and Xander interact here. It is great. I do hope that Xander can get back to being friends with, at least Willow. She is so very accepting so far. I like that about her. I wonder if she`ll end up with anyone in this one. A girlfriend maybe. I love Spander, but I am getting into the whole Willow/Tara thing, not to mention some Buffy/Willow. I was never one for yuri or fem-slash, but I have started to read it recently. There are some very talented writers out there. What am I saying. YOU are one of those talented writers. Should think about doing a book for this series. Turning out a bunch more. You really know how to keep the audience captivated.
Gotta give credit to any beta`s you use. I don`t know if you do or not. If not, you are better than I thought.
anubiset
person chibifae
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent! update soon.
person Josie
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!!! You can't leave it there!! More more!!

Love the connections and the alliances. Please continue.....

Congrats on some great writing

Josie
person TheShadowCat
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Curious kitty wants to know who's at the door, so update soon please.
person Alice
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for violence! Can there be sex now? *coughs* Um, I mean, explantions about what will happen now *whistles* Good chapter, liked seeing Dru and Spike figthing together. Dru may be nutty, but she isn't helpless like she is always painted. She's tough, she can handle a lot. Very cool. And I liked the Dru/Oz dynamic. Very sweet.