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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, I don't really go for the incest or 3some thing, but this is pretty good. So...uh...update soon. Also, I tried e-mailing you, but it didn't let me. Will you e-mail me, please?
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's... better.
Kudos.
Kudos.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your story, but spike seems a little to well ajusted
just thought id tell ya
just thought id tell ya
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... hadn't seen you for awhile. Had hoped you'd taken me seriously.
Still sucks. Suggestion: You don't have to put in *every single minute detail* of their everyday lives. No one really cares about arguments with Giles that have nothing to do with anything or... actually, I skipped most of it, just because it had no real meaning into the story.
And stop putting in things to display your "vast knowlegde of the verse" (and I use sarcastic quotes). It's not canon. Don't try to make it so.
It's not that I don't like it. I like everything besides the way you're writing it. So you can either ignore this and continue to annoy almost the entire Spangel community, or you could try to take some ConCrit (which I realize wasn't in the last review, and I guess I apologize for that much), try to fix things, and get someone with half a brain who you don't know in real life (and won't be afraid to hurt your feelings) to beta for you.
Still sucks. Suggestion: You don't have to put in *every single minute detail* of their everyday lives. No one really cares about arguments with Giles that have nothing to do with anything or... actually, I skipped most of it, just because it had no real meaning into the story.
And stop putting in things to display your "vast knowlegde of the verse" (and I use sarcastic quotes). It's not canon. Don't try to make it so.
It's not that I don't like it. I like everything besides the way you're writing it. So you can either ignore this and continue to annoy almost the entire Spangel community, or you could try to take some ConCrit (which I realize wasn't in the last review, and I guess I apologize for that much), try to fix things, and get someone with half a brain who you don't know in real life (and won't be afraid to hurt your feelings) to beta for you.
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it, jenn...Please continue soon. If I can say somethig, you can't listen the bad commentaries about your fics because they are so wrong. You are amazing!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, stop? There's not really a nice way to put this, so...
Your writing style kinda sucks. It's painful to go through, and the only reason I'm bothering is becuase you're showing up on every list and group I'm part of and I'm about ready to scream.
Nothing personal, just... stop?
Your writing style kinda sucks. It's painful to go through, and the only reason I'm bothering is becuase you're showing up on every list and group I'm part of and I'm about ready to scream.
Nothing personal, just... stop?
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jenn. Great story so far! Kinda long but thats ok! Cant wait to read Ch. 2.. you're working on it right now as we speak on the fone! So this is a daily conversation between me and Jenn when i read her fanfiction... "awww! poor spike! angels sucha bastard! i cant believe he did that!!" "umm Jenn.. you wrote ite.." "yes but its so sad!" lmao