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for Baby, It's Cold Outside

by addielogan

person vs
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story don't let some people get you down. It's very good. Please finish it. I always like a good Spuffy story.
person Cin
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm really liking this story. i check constantly for updates. you're twist of the villian using Spike was great. even if he did cheat on her, which i know he didn't, i trust in your Spuffy love to have her understand & trust in him. i look forward the big happy holiday ending.
person Monkey
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never had a doubt!! Keep it going!! I can't wait for some cuddling under the Christmas lights!!

Love Monkey
person Katrina
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I, for one, am absolutely loving this whole story! Never doubted you for a moment and I'm really enjoying the way this is playing out - can't wait for chapter 11!
person vicki
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. keep writing. i liked your little twist.
person angie
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say- for a story that was supposed to be all about the fluffiness- you?ve got quite a plot going? and I do enjoy it.

The down side of reading WIPs is the not knowing- not knowing where it?s going, not knowing when- if ever- the next part will come, not knowing how long it?s going to be and when the end will come (again- if it ever does).
I can see how some people can?t handle that- I thought about not doing it to my self more then a few times?I have given up on WIPs I started before because it was taking a direction I didn?t like- it is not in any way meant to offend the writer- after all- it takes all kinds?

Anyway, the point is: you should not be discouraged because some readers don?t like where you?re taking your story- it is your story to do what you like with.
You can?t please every body all the time- concentrate on pleasing your self, and you?ll have an audience.

Hope to get the rest of the story soon!
:-)
person Alicia
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still with you and enjoying the plot. I understand the need for a plot twist- or else it would just be smut- which is of course not always a bad thing :-) I'm glad Buffy showed her faith in Spike and I can't wait to see how this all turns out. Don't listen to people who flame- you can't please everyone- but, you have pleased me so keep up the great writing :-) I know I'm not the only one enjoying your story!!
person so
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
j'adore l'histoire
person shell
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well i have to say i love this story and the twist was actually quite good so i wouldnt worry about it!
person Jerrica
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, who gets to kill Dejira? I wanna, I wanna, I wanna!

Please update soon!