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for Baby, It's Cold Outside

by addielogan

person astrodex
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great pacing, you have their voices down perfectly, more, more, more...please.
person Mariana
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!!!! i'm not really inspired right now...but i'm looking forward for more of this so MUCH!!
you've no idea...
hope you update soon though
thanx!!!
person Holly
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're writing this story. Real life has been sucky lately and I really needed the fluffy pick me up. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
person Gabriella
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord, I am s? cracked up! Those two together..! *snicker*
I cant wait to see what it ends with, and what about letting Joyce have to stay a little longer in Sunnydale, a snowstorm perhabs?

I love this story, and it very read-able. Very good :D

Just keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I should have guessed Joyce's trip would last longer. Those kinds of things always seem to come up.
I like the way you characterize the characters too. More please.
person Asakella
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chappies. I'm reviewing, so please update!
person pattyanne
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love it! More, please and soon.
person Jenn
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you updated, I realylike how you wrote them getting along, but they still have petty fights. It's amusing and funny, I'm happy you updated so soon and I can't wait for more!
person Rana
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story Addie! I like how the UST between Buffy and Spike keeps the snark and barbs from becoming all out nastiness. I also like how they are slowly, but surely getting closer to each other. Hmmm, awful convenient that Joyce got called away... Can't wait to see what develops next!
person Jennifer
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! I cant wait to read more! Keep it coming!