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for Right Where I Want Her

by DushkusBitch

person shadowed1figure
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo thats a hard 1.....i think maybe its faith's ...cuz if it was buffy yelling at faith i dont hink she would have said ehr name so softly...you know more like Faith!? nut idk....continue
person kay
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha awsome
person kitty
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At first I didn't realize that it was a poem. Well, thats what I get for multitasking (cleaning the house, u pervs! lol oh wait, i am one!). But it was pretty good. I would have said it was Faith's POV, but then, it all depends on how you read it (and how the author decides it should go) interesting, plz write more
person furiousalwayz
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, if Faith acted this way toward Buffy, I think it would turn Buffy off. If Buffy acted this way toward Faith, I think it would turn Faith on. So I think it's B's POV. The poetic element in the story is great.
person mac
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm, yes I liked this fic, I would go for it being Buffy's POV, altho not too sure, would be a pretty wicked twist if it was. Anyways, loved it, nice work, keep it up! ;o) and thank you for the dedication *mwah*
person michelle
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice job--Very HOT!!! I think it is B's POV. I think u should run w/ this & develop the story more.-it's a fab start!!! I love all your fics by the way-u are a awesome writer. Graet job!!!!