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Great story cant wait for the SPUFFY!!!!!!!!!!!Put us all out of our misery and update PLEASE!!!

I like where this is going. Otherwise, I'd feel awful for Wesley.

AHHHHHHHH!!! Excellent bringing Fred into it. YAY!!! Can't wait for the SPUFFY love. MORE!!

Hmmm, me thinks Buffy thinks she knows love but really hasn't a clue.....wonder what you have in store next.....

Please tell me she ends up with Spike...

Ah, and so the angst and the truth comes out......and oh what a come out it got.....my oh my.....



Kimber

you are getting the friendship developement done realistically very well and I would believe them becoming friends somewhat.....but I see no fire or spark of passion on Buffy's part. Buffy was right to say about the healthy thing. Is it healthy for Spike to be so involved with Buffy and Wes right now, hmmm, on the fence about that at the moment, but see the need for possible future story needs to have that be. The passion, the fire they had just isn't there......you did a great job in giving it to them during the flashbacks.....but now it's like gone. Wes is a better man then most.....most would not want his live in girlfriend going house hunting with her ex, the father of her lost baby. My hats off to the man. I agree with Spike, she has never mentioned the good times only refered to them as him controling her and making her believe someting that was not real. Can't wait to see how you bring the sparkage that gives them Spuffiness.....

Take care, lovely chapter

Kimber

I want Spike to find someone that helps him get over everything bad that's happened in his life.....and right now I don't think it's Buffy.....she really has no direction that is good for Spike right now...maybe later.....but not right now because she has Wes, he needs a Wes figure (not male) to do the same for him, give him hope and balance here and now, not when Buffy becomes available...whenever you break her and Wes up however you do it.....It would be nice or both of them to see that there are choices.....I'm not really sure I'm explaining this exactly how I mean it.....if you have any questions to my insane rambling just ask....LOL!


Kimber

very powerful writing - very strong story line and very believeable charcaters - can't wait foe more.

More please.