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for The First Time

by HayleyJay

person me
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u r my idol!
person chell
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautifully written & Hot to match. I loved how u explained the Chosen 2 1st time-it was sweet & erotic at the same time. I loved how tender Faith was w/ B & how they responded to each other. U did a fab job-u should continue this. I love all your fics.
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more. i loved this story alot.
person Dylan
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that certainly got me all hot and bothered..thanx *wink*
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really great. I love how sweet Faith was with Buffy. And the descriptions, well...wow. You certainly have the whole sex scene writing thing going for you. I think you did an excellent job. I hope you write some more soon. If shameless begging will work, let me know. I am not above it. (Also thanks for the review for my story.)
person LJ13
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww it was so cute and romantic *tear* ... that just put me in such a good mood ... great story ... hope to read more stories just like it from u soon