rate_review Reviews

Ok I'm not even gonna lie... i did a little happy dance when i saw that this had been updated. I'm not ashamed! lol
It's been waaaay too long since I've read this OR feed the troll. But you are doing an amazing job with this here. The heat that just radiates between Buffy and Faith is almost tangible! You REALLY know how to pull me in with the HOT SEX! and I'm so loving all the little sub-plots/ threats that the slayers will be facing. The sceen between Willow and Faith was interesting... and left me wondering what the hell is going on there. are they on good ground now? or is that too easy? And I just want to strangle Riley! you really capture the majorities loathing of the beefstick!

Hope you post more of this soon. I know life can get busy, but now I'm hooked again! please be kind!

YEEEESSS! Just when I had given up hope... again. Poet you have to stop playing with my emotions here. j/k
This last update was absolutely amazing. So rich in debth here. and at the end, with the convo between Willow and Faith, was so very believable. But you did leave it sorta open there... why do i get the feeling that it isnt all resolved? YOu're sneeky like that.

Great Job! Perfect blend of the funny the hot and the intense. My only complaint is that I want more and I want it soooooon!?

most excellent! as always with your stuff, i loved it all.

i hate to disagee with another goddess of writing, bkitty, but i liked the faith/willow resolution. strip all the bravado away and what you got was two very flawed people (that really don't want to be as flawed as they are) having a heart-to-heart to work through their issues. it was a nice peak into the darkness that willow has, but then you start to bring it back to the wonderful willow that we know does exist. absolutely fantastic. (of course i'm dying to see what evil riley has in store for us. feel free to keep him the loser that we all know he is.) ;o)

Woweeeee!! Finally! Ive been waiting foreva for more of this! but let me tell you Poet, this was SO worth the wait!! The super HOT fuffy goodness and then the interaction between Willow and Faith was fantastic! perfectly written. OH and how funny was Xander's balls! You had me scared at the end of the last part. good to know it was just dreams... but i still think Willow is up to something. and Riley! UGH! please kill him please?

MOOOOORREEE SOOOOON! dont make me beg!

In the words of Kylie Minogue "Give me more more more more more"

Very well written and a very interesting story. Can't wait for the next installment.

Great update. I'm very much with the liking of Buffy not being able to keep her hands to herself.

This I adored: ---?It isn?t obvious?? I ask the skin of her neck, it tastes so good. Faith flavored, I should call Ben and Jerry?s.

And this I adored even more: ---

?He?s gonna flash us!!?? Dawns eyes pop open and I reach out a hand to cover them. What the hell is wrong with him!?

?Xander no one wants to see??

I think the Willow sitch was maybe resolved a little to easy, after all the time you took to set it up. Or maybe she hasn't really forgiven Faith, but is just lulling her into a false sense of security. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.

DUDE. With the love and everything. Oh, what first? REALLY hot sex, always gets my motor running. But far more than that is my love for the way you're writing the Faith/Willow antagonism. Willow has a reason to be jealous and Faith's able to be understanding and they aren't friends and it'll probably get worse before it gets better but we have these little plateaus (plateaux?) of apparent friendship that really hook me in. Plus, I like Tara's attempts to be friendly being thwarted by Willow. Oh, and did I mention the really incredibly hot sex with the understanding Buffy POV? 'Cause that was excellent. Forth you! More! More!

still woozy from seeing faith taking buffy from behind. helps to ease the pain from the cliff hanger ending.

You've got some lovely language choices in this bit--my favourite image being of Buffy's "summertime skin". That's just a perfect description. And, of course, the sex scene was TEH HOT, as we say in internet lingo. I don't know how y'all do this so effortlessly. I think I could learn a thing or two about pacing from you. Plus, plot development! I like that too. It reminds me of all the stories I want to write. Very inspiring. Go you!

i love this story and i dont want willow, riley and the council messing the precious thing that buffy and faith have. especailly willow and riley. rileys always has been totally ass and willow shouldnt be that angry ,but then agian it is not my story so i dont care its just pissing me of that she has all threatening when she could just kill faith in that instant if she wanted to and would to if tara wasnt theri. please whats up with that last part. was it a dream or was it like something willow did so she can kill faith for. that was sad when faith found out that she had killed buffy. please update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon. and please let buffy be alright and faith too. that love scene was so hot.