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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't really now what to think about it. Every chapter brings new suprises, but the last one, ooh creepy, so very creepy. I still feel shivers running down my back. After the ending of first chapter I knew that something is going to happen to Xander, but it was devious. It wasn't a new idea, but the way you did it, marvelous. Wordplay and bloodplay and fire and water and wow, still can't forget it. It's a pity you didn't continue.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How utterly mysterious and creepy. I love it!
I hope you're still working on this.
~B~
I hope you're still working on this.
~B~
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
confused as hell... but damned curious now!
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey
I just wanted to let you know that I loved your story. I am hoping you continue it.
I really enjoy the darker aspect of Xander. Most people seem to write him off as silly or unstable. I adore him aware and calculated, as you've made him. The third chapter made me smile quite maliciously.
?When you come to where you are judged, tell your God that I will not stop to make my name count.?
He retains a deeper purpose, not truly *good*, but worthwhile and self-pleasing.
anyway - looking forward to the next installment
I just wanted to let you know that I loved your story. I am hoping you continue it.
I really enjoy the darker aspect of Xander. Most people seem to write him off as silly or unstable. I adore him aware and calculated, as you've made him. The third chapter made me smile quite maliciously.
?When you come to where you are judged, tell your God that I will not stop to make my name count.?
He retains a deeper purpose, not truly *good*, but worthwhile and self-pleasing.
anyway - looking forward to the next installment
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can not wait for the next chapter hurry!!!!!!
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are FANTASTIC, hurry up, pleasepleaseplease
i crave the next chapter.
i crave the next chapter.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::shudders delightedly:: Oh bloody hell! This is shaping up into a seriously yummy fic. Loved ch 3 a lot. I can't tell if the Xan-man is vampy or not, and thats one of the things I can't wait to find out. So, he tortured the priest cause he was a paedophile, I get that, but did he pick him just for fun, or is he a psychotic evil force of good? I'm guessing that he will meet the LA crew soon. ::drools in anticipation:: Waiting eagerly for te next chapter!