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Enjoyed that can't wait for more.

LOL

Spike is still a twit.....and Angel needs to get over the fact so what they didn't trust him......to be honest I didn't trust him all year....making a deal with the devil, and all that......His deal with devil cost him the life of Fred, Wesley, and Gunn....the breaking down of Lorne......all to give his son a chance to have a normal life......I think that was a touch on the selfish side and he should look in the mirror before he condems others who questioned his trustablitity after taking over W & H......yes a parent would do anything to save his son, but look at the price it cost.....

I love the trip here, it's so cool and I can't wait for the next chapter.....hope you won't be leaving us hanging for too long, LOL....]

I just read your latest chapter and I realized that I was so caught up in the whole Buffy/Spike dynamic and everything I had no idea what was going on with the actual plot. So I went back and reread from the beginning and I wanted to tell you I really like your storyline regarding the prophecy and the hellmouth. Its original and very well thought out so far. I think its neat that they are actually out of the country and exploring and I can't wait to see what happens in Mayan time!!

Hhmmm? What will happen next? Can't wait to find out!! I'm so anxious for buffy and Spike to get back together!!! When!! Sorry, I'll try to be a little more patient.

Interesting twist at the end didn't expect time travel. Nice to see Spikes thawing out a little. I'm really looking forward to more.

HAHAHA! Spike and his 'bloody resolve'. Really I wanted that Buffy could suffer a little more (she fucked the Immortal, for God's sake!), but well, he is love's bitch. Damn it.

Oh and Spike of short memory loss or it was it just wasn't as good, since she beat his ass before he could finish is first sexual encounter since becoming solid form........I personally hated that episode and can't even imagine where Joss would think we'd want Spike doing Harmony......ewwww factor on that one, LOL

The pretty skirt and doing Harmony on the desk....hmmmm. He knew he was no longer a ghost and that Buffy was alive.....so who is he to talk about Buffy moving on a sleeping with the Immortal, thinking he was not of this earth any longer......Very bad Spike and hypocrite of the worst......bastard.....LOL! Hmm who is worse.....Harmony or the Immortal.....oh I hope someone brings that up......and Buffy kicks his ass and gives him the cold shoulder.....for a little bit.....*this time she'd have a good reason to treat blondie bear like the Doggie his acted with Harm back then.*

Good update like the Indiana Jones interlude.

I enjoy this story so much! I kept checking after reading chapter 6, but after a while I think updates were a bit scarce. Now that the story is up and running again, I have to say I am glad to be back with it. Usually with most fics, if there is a gap in postings, I'll have to reread the story and refresh my memory. For this story, I didn't have to do that. The first six installments were burned onto my brain.. I love them.
I've always wondered what the dynamic between remaining angel characters and buffy tvs characters would be like, given the callous behavior of Giles when it came to saving Fred and the overall contempt of the scoobies towards the angel cast for taking over wolfran and hart.
I've always felt there'd be hell to pay, and now, I'm actually seeing it.
keep up the good work, I'll be coming back for me.

-kare

AH! What happens next????? I'm so happy that Buffy grew a little spine! My God! Spike and Angel are assholes! At least things got better after they got on the plane! But I don't know how much more of this angst I can take! There's only so much before you begin to lose readers. So far, the story has been nothing but angst - perpetual angst is not good! Please, throw us a bone here! I love your story, but if something or someone doesn't change soon, I'm going to stop reading this. Just tie Buffy and Spike together and then to a tree and leave them there! Send Nina and Angel away for 24 hours so Buffy and Spike can FINALLY clear the air!!!!!!! Please!

I also agree with whoever said that if felt like Dawn and Willow have betrayed Buffy. Dawn and Willow say that they want to get Buffy and Spike back together, but everything they've done has had the opposite effect! One of the big reasons Spike is avoiding Buffy is the whole immortal issue - but by Dawn and Willow refusing to tell Spike, they're not giving him any incentive to think better or differently of Buffy. I hate Dawn and Willow very much right now - and hope they either get their come-uppance or get bitch-slaped. Either one would make me happy.

Though I have to give praise where praise is due: I love Xander and Illyria. I love that Xander has finally grown up, and Illyria is cool no matter what - her interactions with Spike are a fav of mine!

I can't wait to read more to see if something changes! I hope I'm not coming off sounding too harsh and just plain mean. That's not my intent - but I just want to let you know the areas that could use some improvement to make this story so unbelievably awesome.