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glad to see you updated again!

So, Buffy pulls Spike out of the goop and then . . . .?? Cliffie there. More soon please.

I really REALLY like this fic. I am so inrigued as to where you are going with this and I hope that you consider continuing it. The plot is very original, and your writing is great!! I check in to AFF all the time for this fic, so please keep with it. Thanks!! Amy

Really pleased with the update, great story. Wish B/S could have talked more about what happened after S/D. Hope to read more soon.

Finally! I've waiting forever, but it worth it. I wish Joss Whedon could have been like this with the characters. I think you vission is more mature.

hmmmm, see I had a different view of Angel and Buffy's cookie scene......I really thought she was giving him the mature, but not mature brush off.....I think Buffy was still making a journey to finding out who she really was....and when she went back having chosen her champion she was starting to realize where her true feelings where heading. I always felt that Buffy didn't love or like her self in season 6...she never really showed she loved anyone, and seemed to protect Dawn out of duty....until the world almost ended and she and Dawn saw the new day together.....and she finally opened herself up to feeling more then depressed and less post tramatic stress like......It would be nice if both Spike and Angel try and remember what a young girl Buffy was back then and all she's survived....and see the woman she now has become....you've matured her rather well.....and now they are acting like the hurt little children.

Will Spike feel as non caring as Angel seemed to be that the Immortal had used a spell on Buffy.....will he be more upset when he finds out Dawn was affected too and blame Buffy.......and I think it's soooo male idiot thinking that Angel wouldn't see that if Spike loved Buffy sooo much then why would he screw another woman so quick after becoming solid again.......just like a man....think with their smaller brain and not see what a hypocrite they really are. He knew Buffy was alive and still seduced Harmony......Buffy's under a spell and being used, (could be viewed as non consensual sex) by the Immortal.......if not for the spell would she have given the prick the time of day, let alone the use of her body....hmmmmm.

I'm loving the story and to be honest it's working rather like I'd expect a Joss story, all angst and making you scream at the screen, saying......."No, No, it should work like this.....No, No, Joss what have you done".....instead we get to say, "Dana, no, no, no...fix it make it better now......." But I have the faith I will like your ending better the Joss's, LOL.

As always you keep me on my toes......thanks for the story and hope to see more soon

Kimber

It is great to see that you have not forgotten about this fic, i hope to see more updates soon, i think this is a great story!

Thanks for the latest! Glad to see that Spike and Buffy are working through the dreck in their not so perfect lives. Love this story with the getting even with the Wankers' Council. They so deserve to be treated like shit. More soon please.

Wonderful story. I for one am glad at the way Buffy and Giles are being treated. Yes, Spike and Angel are being a little self-rightous, but damn it; they deserve to be. The pace of the story is good. It takes a person a little time to get over being bitter over someone they love(d). I look forward to reading more.

Just found this story and read it straight through. How can you be unsure about it? It's terrific. Please finish it.