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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good story. so when are you going to update it. pls update it
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
like, do you know how long it took me to read this storY?but it was SO worth it. i love it to pieces! you are an amazing writer, and i cant wait for more! kevin is a great chracter, but he does say 'yes m'am' a little to often, but the story is fab! and the ceremony thing#? like, great idea! wow, please keep going!
Nikee the Lady of the Wood
(pen name on fanfiction.net= I love elves)
Nikee the Lady of the Wood
(pen name on fanfiction.net= I love elves)
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You're doing a great job and I hope it keeps going. Dawn is my favorite character and I never thought she got enough attention. I also used to wonder if I was the only one intrigued by the Kevin character in "The Body" I always hoped they would bring him back. Thanks for doing it for them and keep it up.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more. more. lol sorry i don't deal with suspense all that well. lol
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally, at last here we go again, Thanks for starting back up. I was worried that you had forgotten about it but it was worth waiting for. This is definently the best series in the Buffy batch.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I don't read a lot of stories with Dawn as a main character, but I like it. It's sweet and sexy, which is sometimes hard to do. Keep going!
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September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. They should get into other "activities" soon, though. And I can't wait to read the magic ritual to destroy the orb!
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July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOOD STORY, BUT I ALSO THINK DAWN AND KEVIN SHOULD DO MORE RACY THINGS. BASICALLY PUT DIFFERENT KINDS OF SEX IN THERE.
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May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
exellent! Keep it up, more more more!
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story, continue the trend and give us more chapters!