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Hey everyone.

First off, thank you for your reviews thus far. I am still continuing with this story, and I really enjoy writing it.

Secondly, I am editing each chapter at a time, adding length and clearing up a few things in the process.

Thirdly, a BIG story arc has been moved up, so I will be introducing that during chapter six. I would highly suggest going back and reading the story again as a lot of things will be changed to accomadate this change. These big changes will start around chapter four.

Anyways, thanks for reading an reviewing- when I've editing things up to chapter seven, I'll start writing again- but chapter seven will be completely re-written.

this is just wonderful, well written and obviously you care about the story...keep it coming

I think you are doing a great job on this fic, especially for a newbie. It must be hard writing fics. I have never written one, I have some cool ideas, but I know that I suck at writting. I don't know, maybe one day, I'll acually write one. Keep up the good work and please post another chapter soon.
NEONEX

This is a good story but unsure where he plot is going on, I am really enjoyingit so continie. Well done

its comming along great. you should be proud of yourself. i know that i for one, have a fic that all my friends think is good, but im too lazy to type it up and put it on the web. im sure that there are others like me. dont worry about if it is good or not, just that you like it. thats all that matters. that, and that you are spreading your writting to others. ^_~

as for your da, i hope that all goes well with him. peace and prayers.

I don't know about anyone else, but I am enjoying this story. I am a true B/S believer all the way. Please post another chapter soon.
NEONEX

Hey Neo, glad you're liking it so far.

As for the NC-17 chapter with Spike and his guide, there is a very good reason why I choose to do that- it'll be more obvious in a later chapter.

Besides, in the words of the Great Joss, you have to give the fans what they need, not what the want.

In other words, twisted situations and loadssexusexual tension, heh.

I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

I think you are doing a great job on this fic. Don't worry to much about the grammer and spelling though. Some of the best fics I've read, have the worst grammer and spelling. Ususally, if it's a good fic (which yours is) most people can look past the mistakes. Keep up the good work and please post another chapter soon. Good luck with the job hunt and I hope fat father feels better soon.
NEONEX

I'll beta it what is betaing?

That was good, especially for your first time. My opinion, only do NC 17 if it is with the real Buffy