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for Memory Redux

by MadRog

person Qellila
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really liked it. It was a great idea too.
person Jane
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow - this was awesome. I wade through so many crap fanfics to get to the odd decent one, & when I think a fanfic is excellent I always make sure tell that to the author, because hopefully flattery will make them write more. I've always thought Buffy & Spike could be really happy together, if Buffy wasn't such a bitch. But since she was, AU fics are pretty much the only way they can be really happy. But of course, experience makes ppl who they are, & if you change too much you risk changing the characters so much that they're barely recognisable. I think you've done an amazing job of balancing all that. Only criticism is that you should get a beta, or a better beta. No probs with spelling or grammer in writing style, but a fair few mistakes like added little words. Not nearly enough to detract from overall magnificance of story. THis is defn going in my recommended reading.
person angie
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. It was very well-writen and believeable- which are the things I look for in my fics. I also loved the happy ending, it was fun to read... Thank you! :)
person Caroline
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Dana , loving it very , very much. Making me feel warm and tingly. Breathtaking , phenomenal story.
I especy apy appreciated the way you re-introduced bit of memories , little by little , in their minds , until the final acknowledgement of Spike being a vampire, but their life is not destroyed , bc they earned happiness..
All along you captured Spike's emotions beautifully ; he was so amazing in his wonder of Beth deeply in love with him , so touching in his insecurities.
And your Buffy was exquisite , lovely , daring , passionate.

A wonderful , wonderful spuffy tale , with a great ending.( Yummy human Spike , and pretty little babies in the future) What a fabulous journey for our lovers !
And I'm delirious with joy knowing you have a new project . For now , I 'm gonna read " Future written in blood " , and I shall wait with patience for the sequel .

You rock !
person carri
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Dana! I really loved your story and just want to say thank you for sharing it with us. I especially liked the way you pictured Beth/Buffy and Spike (of course!) as loving, passionate and caring cpouple as we all know it could be (and should be!) But the only time we ever get to see that is when people like you write such a wonderful story. Please keep writing. I'm looking forward to your new stories.
person Kimber
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dana


Can I say......Job well done......you had me waiting and wanting more from the first chapter.....

Thanks for sharing

Kimber
person jem jem
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Madrog.
Memory Redux is one of my favourite sories at the moment.I have been hoping that unlike many Spuffy storeis recently,thqt this will ahvee a h end ending and it looks like that may happen .Please indulge your obsession as I ahve enjoyed it very much.
JemJem
person Pin
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I've loved the whole idea of your reorganized universe. The new chapter is excellent and I think your solution to their dilemma is great. Thumpity, thump, who could that be???
person dusty273
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved your playful!buffy, she was so much nicer to spike :)
in fact, this is one of my favorite stories and i just wanted to tell you that, thanks for sharing it with us :D
person white rabbit
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that chapter was well worth the wait...i love the way this story flows, very smooth, and just as i thought you were about to give me a true spuffy climax you pull another cliff hanger...so now i have to wait once again with baited breath for the next 'thrilling chapter' your a true literary tease bad/good you...and now comes the begging...please...please...pleaseee hurry with the updates...and if that doesn't make you write quicker, then i give up!!! lol