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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is one of the better Spike the Slayer/ Buffy the Bloody stories that I've read! I think you should continue this because it could become one full length fanfic... I would even nominate you for the Spuffy AU awards!!
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
K, I thot there was only 1 chap for my first review and just went back to read more... I still think Spike could be a little more 'forecful' (what can I say, I'm really really kinky, but then EVERYONE here is aware of that), but all in all, this story touched me in a way I would like to be touched on adaily basis, preferably with a hot babe and some candles around a bathtub... anyhoo, I generally hate buffy and Spike, Sam reminded me of Buffy o BtVS, but I think you make it work. I would definitely be willing to back you with feedback betaing and other support if you continued this story. Of course, I have 1 request : as much angst as you want...but a)they should end up happily ever after and b) we should get to see Buffy get to suck off her man, good and proper!
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for all the great feedback! I'm relatively new to the world of fanfic so it's wonderful to hear what you guys thought of my story. I'm working on a lot of other stories right now, one of which is a sequel dealing with Spike and Buffy telling his friends fam family. It's going to be a while before it's ready, but I'll post it as soon as it's all nice and polished! : )
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I liked your fic. It pretty different Spike being the Slayer and Buffy being a vamp. Haha....it was good. You should right more fics using this idea. hehe Great Job! :)
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love this fic. I've never seen one like it before and that's what I love to read Spuffy fics with new and interesting twists. Anyway this fic is completely open fo a sequel. I would love to see one where Spike and Buffy have to find a way to get along with Spike's friends and Watcher. That would be fabulous, I would definietly read that.
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!
SExiest moment :Every woman should know how to suck her man off good and proper.
Funniest moment :Blondie bear", Riley
Gripes: I don't see Buffy as british yet, and while their roles have reversed, their genders haven't. Buffy is kind of masculine in an odd way I can't explain, and Spike is coming off and an annoying little asexual jerkface schoolboy clark kent geek
Also, I kinda think you coul have used a known character for Spike's bf, like Kennedy for ex. but again, I'm just griping needlessly now, also maybe there is a smanatha jones and I don't know it.
best insult :about the aryan sex
Suggestions and requests : Settle them more approrpiately in their respective genders and what Spike would say as a woman and vice versa, and I hope you will continue this story, I would love to read more!
SExiest moment :Every woman should know how to suck her man off good and proper.
Funniest moment :Blondie bear", Riley
Gripes: I don't see Buffy as british yet, and while their roles have reversed, their genders haven't. Buffy is kind of masculine in an odd way I can't explain, and Spike is coming off and an annoying little asexual jerkface schoolboy clark kent geek
Also, I kinda think you coul have used a known character for Spike's bf, like Kennedy for ex. but again, I'm just griping needlessly now, also maybe there is a smanatha jones and I don't know it.
best insult :about the aryan sex
Suggestions and requests : Settle them more approrpiately in their respective genders and what Spike would say as a woman and vice versa, and I hope you will continue this story, I would love to read more!
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue this story! Pleaaaaase!