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for The Future Is What We Make

by chilli

person Nabiki
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
when is the next chapter and can add some more chapters to your other stories. I really enjoy them all. I have a question is Xander pregnant with the jazter demons children or child.
person Linda
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What one little lie can create and one truth destroy. A very powerful piece of writing, strong ima and and a depth to characters that is rare in fanfiction. Wonderful writing! Please don't keep us all hanging too long!!!

p.s. Thanks for making Buffy face the truth in her actions. I really like Willow in this story too!!!
person Datiye
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are gonn continue writing, right? 'Cause if you didnt that would be just mean. I mean come on, Xander just woke up and there is quite a bit of unfinished business. I will not be satisfied until you bring the story back to present day and explain why the hell Xander got fat. You don;t get fat by the constant excersise of killing demons so I assume that you must have something else in mind. I don't mean to be so demanding but sometimes a rough hand is required to push someone to greater lenths and I hope you will forgive my rudeness. If you write a new chapter I can assure you that my next reveiw will be filled with sickeningly glorious praise. So, please continue.
person Sue
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Please write more. This is really great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Morgana
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really good.I hope you post more chapters soon. :O)
person zelda
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story i love the way yopu write the characters your story has an excellent plot and a good balance of both drama and humor. I can't wait to read more of the story.
person Nabiki
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dear lemon, please write some more chapters as soon as you can. I am assuming that Zander survives because of your prolog I hope youre sue sure that willow and cordy and the three children and spike and angel survive so hope I can some more soon.
person Jessie
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update really really soon....
person XGA
schedule June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Weres chap 8 that you posted at Yaho groups
person Terri
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Looking forward to reading more.