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for The Future Is What We Make

by chilli

person Nabiki
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Lemon, I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter please please please write the next chapters as quickly as you can.
person Nabiki
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Lemon, Please write more chapters as fast you can because I would love to know what happen to the babies.
person Nabiki
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Lemon, when are you write chapter nine and so on because I would love to know if there is something wrong with them or is it that tjey are three boys and two girls or three girls and two boys, or four girls and one boy, or four boys and one girl, or does one look like Xander and other four each look like their daddy's or does one of them look like Angel.
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
These new chapters are great!
person Teresa
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read the latest chapters and Havens, what a cliffhanger! I enjoyed seeing how the Jatzars learned about humans, especially by dealing with Xander and his children! This is a great story, and I hope that the next chapter(s) are posted soon!
person zelda
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow this is an incredible story i can't wait to read chapter 9.
person LollyPop
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I'm glad you're updating. Hope to read more soon. ~Lolly~
person Marion
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI,

I've read the 13 chapters in one go,
love the story, and can't wait until you add the rest of them, truly captivating...

let me guess? the children are girls right? right??? of course I'm right ( ignores swelling of the neck)
Anyway,
I love what you are doing with this, though I am a bit curious how you are going to bring the Xander from this AU to the meeting where he's telling all of this, becasue, If I remember correctly Cordy saw Xander's stomach which was also out off proportion, so also pregnant? at the time??

Maybe it'gel\gel's???

wellwell,

I guess I'll find out in the new chapters,

byen

Marion
person Terri
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm hoping that the babies are girls. Now that would be cool. Please post more soon.
person Nabiki
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write another chapter or more.