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for The Future Is What We Make

by chilli

schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, just wow! amazing story, so emotional and intense. the dynamic between all the different characters in -both- time lines. simply amazing, fabulous job with!
person eali
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please, please please may I barrow part of this story idea, it gave me the coolest idea ever, What if buffys Richard was Richard from the anita blake series.
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great! It was fun to see Neutral get to be a choice for once. I loved the power of seeing what a difference choice could make, From Xander's decision between truth and lie to his deciding to make no choice at all. I was also reall glad to see that in a way he got everything he lost back
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is legal crack, and I thank you for writin' it. Maybe Mr. Whedon should be contactin' you..?
person Loki
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the most poigant stories I have ever read; Xander's sacrifice was beautiful beyond words and I absolutely loved all the new characters you introduced *giggles* especially Taryn. It was absolutely fantastic and wonderfully original. My one objection is that having five children would probably kill you, simply in terms of sleep deprivation ^_~, but I'm willing to let that one slide. Amazing.

~Loki
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles and crys* Noooo!! AFF has eaten the end (actually prob 3/4 or more) of chapter 8 cont. (ch 13), and I tried to go to the other archive sites listed with no success, PLEASE can you fix it!! In case you haven't guessed I'm really enjoying this story!!
person Purple Mist
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gee, this was an interesting story until the FUCKING RAPE scene!!! Give us a WARNING so people who hate that can avoid it!! YOU MADE ME CRY!!!
person Tim
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much. This has been a great story! Its been wonderful reading it.
person Nabiki
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear lemon, how is this situation going to affect Buffy and the others.
person Tim
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the new chapter, Please update again soon. Its a really great story. And I'm dieing to see what happens!