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for Barbed Wire and Roses

by DMEvans

person Kath
schedule December 22, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. Your main character is bordering a little on the 'Mary Sue' level, with all those mystical powers mg heg her larger than life, and I wish Wesley was being portrayed a bit stronger, but I like the set up and the plot is intriguing. I like the conflict between Cordy and Saeth and that Angel has picked up on it, while the other guys haven't. Looking forward to more!