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for Only Human After All

by kleysa

schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't have anything to do at the moment so I decided to see how good our webmistress was at writing and was half surprised she writes better than me. ^_^;

Althought I'm not as familiar with Buffy as most people, I could still follow the story and knew the characters. Your writing style flowed wonderfully and I like how you portrayed Angel's feelings on the matter. The only small problem I have with the fic that it is a bit too short, but that's kind of a moot point seeing that you expressed everything pretty well. I probably should read the tips you posted. ^_^;;

In closing, big up for running the site. ^_^
person FaithLover
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice and i like the way got got faith's voice down. angel sure has some probelms to work out!! more about faith would be nice.