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for Down and Dirty!

by HorseEMY

person Marcus
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...
U sure u aint talked to kim recently? After saturday?
Yea, I thought the story was really gd, well done!
However... lol
Needs some spel checking/proof reading and some paragraphs/spaces.

But yea, very good and keep it up!!