AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Dangerous

by addielogan

person wolfspider
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dear what will Connor do? nice interaction between angel and Connor. Connor just needs to open his eyes and forget the picket fence deal. He is who he is and he should be with Anne. though I can't imagine Daddy Spike's reaction to all of this. KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Brunettepet
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this supportive Angel, doling out comfort and good advice. Connor needs to cut his losses with Laura and move on. Anne's slip with Spike was nice, too. It should have him hyper alert for future interaction between Connor and his daughter. When he finally realizes what Connor and Anne have been up to there should be fireworks. I can't wait.
person Stacy
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate coming to the end of the update. Especially for this story. Don't get me wrong, I pretty much feel this way with any story you write. But, I don't know, there's something about this story. I think maybe it's Connor and his internal struggle. Or maybe it's the whole taboo, shagging a teenager thing (I'll admit it, I'm kind of pervy). I love this story! Thank you for writing it.
person sunny
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! updates!
thank you.
i'm really enjoying this story : )
Nice to have something new!
person vamp19762000
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hate Laura. Hopefully she's gone. Please keep writing. I love this story. Update soon.
person wolfspider
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa that was a great chapter. Connor fighting with himself and trying to get things together. Anne explaining things so well. How sweet was Spike to his daughter. I loved the angst between him and Angel that was awesome. Well i can't say that I am sorry is Laura is letting Connor loose, so now maybe he find himself and be with who is supposed to be with. Great story.
person bella28
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Please continue.
person Barry
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Miss Logan,
Well, as i said the other night, i don't particularly like Connor, ubt I gave this a shot. I't is a very interesting story, and I look forward to seeing where it goes.

Oh, and by the way....IT'S SPIKE!!! SPIKE IS BACK!!! OH HAPPY DAY!!!

Barry
person Brunettepet
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Laura was certainly a queen bitch, and by her father's phone manner it must be genetic! Maybe Connor's mind has been made up for him on that front. It sounded like Laura had issued an ultimatum, and Connor had disappointed her for the last time...Connor still has huge issues to overcome, and Anne's simple psychobabble won't just force him to heal emotionally. I also don't think Anne's assertion that Spike won't kill Connor because it would hurt her will keep Spike from bruising the boy. This is very entertaining and the dialogue in this chapter was excellent.
person Niamh
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can I bitch-slap Connor's wife? Please? Now? Sheit. Good chapter. . . nice that Spike finally showed. . . and he's worried about his baby girl. But boy is Connor in for the shit when he finds out.