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for Dangerous

by addielogan

person bella28
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see this had been updated. I really love this story. Very compelling. You've really got the voices down.
person Mhairiayn
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well get on with it you know it is not nice to leave us hanging for too long now don't ya? Enjoyed Dangerous liked the way you carried forward from Daylight ending Buffy/Spike baby. OMG great now I am anxiously waiting for more. Very good writing. Liked Anne/Conner coupling. Good idea Conner another little used character. Thumbs up
person Niamh
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh bloody hell. How can you do that to me? After . . . you know. . . this is just. . . I'm wounded by this cliffhanger, deeply, savagely wounded. I had no bloody clue this was gonna happen. . . you. . . you.. . meanie. Write more now dammit!! Right the hell now!!
person vamp19762000
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more! Every chapter is getting better and better. Connor's starting to sound like a broken record though. He needs to make up his mind.
person Brunettepet
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anne's dream of living in Council housing and playing house with Connor is a bit naive, but she's right calling him a cold bastard. He could be less harsh with her. Spike's reaction was spot on, and his frustration at not finding those demons should really fuel his anger. Nice job with this chapter.
person wolfspider
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh such angst there. Anne and Connor both slicing and dicing with the feelings there. OUCHIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Shit, Spike is pissed and well hey a few punches to Angel never a bad thing at all,but hopefully Spike can calm down enough to know the facts of things. EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;-P, there i reveiwed now write more NOW *grins*
person sunny
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ag!
this is so what i've been waiting for!
very cruel of you to leave me hanging so...
person Nia
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nothing to worry about at all. . . . . yeah. . . coz the fic is called Dangerous on a whim. . . LOL. . . (didya like that?) I'm tired and when I'm tired I get loopy. . . so yeah. . . Good update. Nice conversation between father and son, even if said father is a wanker. . . . Poor Spike, sleeping in a chair. . . and oops with the scary moment with Connor. Silly boy, thinking he can get one over on Spike. . .
person barry
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you are cruel for leaving it hanging....but also damn good for leaving it at a point I'll have to come back for.

Keep it up chick.

Barry
person vamp19762000
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the father/son talk. It's nice to see them getting along.