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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeexcelent. Now this is the kind of story and plot twist I can sink my teeth into. Well done indeed. And yer other story, pervy that it is ~_^ is very good as well. Write what the muse let's ye write, and don't force it.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh oh i am so happy to see this update. Buffy using Laura as a punching bag was great. Angel actually standing up for his son for a change. WOW. Best friends are just great for that needed information. I hope the information Melissa found will help out. Great update and don't worry it's very ok you got "caught" up in that other fic LOL
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rebecca using her mom's connections is a clever plot device - I'm sure Anyanka left a trail of satisfied customers across the centuries. Anne punching Laura was violent and satisfying. The follow up of correcting her usage of the word assault made me laugh. Laura must have some reason for remaining at The Hyperion, other than goading her father-in-law and her husband's jail bait girlfiriend, right? If not, it's entertaining having her there for those two bits of drama! Nice job with this chapter, it moved the story along nicely.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohhhhhh. . so he's in a place he can survive in. . . but time is always wonky when you skip dimensions. . . wonder how long he'll be gone. . . at least they know where he is now.
Good chapter, I loved it.
Good chapter, I loved it.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! always with the cliffies. Oh well it doesn't really matter this story is awesome enough for me to wait for the next chapter but still soon would be nice lol. Ok so im wondering if Laura is based on a real person because I've found that charcters pretty much no one likes are based on some one real. This is great as are all your other stories. keep on writing
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-Oh. Laura, huh? Someone just needs to deal with her and send her back to her perfect suburban lifestyle. They have more important things to worry about. Should I know the story of who Rebecca Giles is? Which story is she in? Anyway, as always, love this story. Thanks for writing.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who? what? why? how? okay, i get the whole story, but that was just...wow at the end. what right does laura have coming back when she left him to begin with?
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH evil cliffhanger woman just evil LOL. Poor Anne she is aching inside so badly. I truely hope that they get Connor back. Spike punching Angel was just grand. Go Cordy for being assertive with Angel too. Rebecca is great and I think Anne will do well to have her bestest friend there. WHAT Laura decided now to look for her husband....dumbass....maybe they can trade her in the hell demension for Connor...*laughs* GREAT chapter and HELL yeah I am still reading now write more hehehe
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really should have said something sooner, because I've been totally addicted since I first read this story, but it truly is a great fic. It's very well-written, and I love Connor and Anne together. It's not often you find something that's an awesome read on AFF, but this really is. Can't wait to read the rest. :)
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good to have Rebecca as a little comic relief amidst all the angst. Cordelia's comments, too, were often funny. I loved her remarks to Angel about the pentagram and not learning from his own mistakes time after time. You're doing an excellent job keeping her in voice. Anne's grief and remorse are well written, and having Buffy there will be a big comfort. Laura's arrival was a surprise, I'm looking forward to Angel and Anne's reaction to her.