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by QueenB

person Anon
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly hot... ::shudders::

I loved it.. please, please write another one!
person Yaoi_guy6739
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was VERY hot. You should make a sequel. I loved it all except for the spelling errors that actually made me laugh out loud.
person DittoSpikette
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rather hot. Dxxoo
person DittoSpikette
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rather hot. Dxxoo
person cerisaye
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I thought this was entirely in character regarding Wesley, because I happen to agree that he has wanted Angel ever since Sunnydale. There's a dark twisted part inside him that would be excited by Angelus and all too willing to submit to his attentions, knowing as he does that Angel never would force the issue like this. Typical Angelus to take advantage of Wesley's ambivalence and then leave him desperate for more. It doesn't make easy rreading, but I enjoyed the story a lot.

I too would like to see what happens when Angelus gets to Sunnydale.
person little one
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. thats all i have to say. is wow. very well written, and captivating. i couldnt stop reading it! it got my heart pounding. you did an excellent job. first non raunchy A/W fic i have read. Two thumbs up. I was most impressed with how you described Wesley's emotions. It wasnt just f*ck and go...you know? He he. Ok bye! ^^
schedule April 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved this one, QB, but I'm hoping you'll continue it. Please oh, please, can't he go visit Sunnydale next?

-Rhi
person Random
schedule April 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the fic. Just wanted to let you know "Calvary" and "cavalry" are two different words.
person Jasmine
schedule April 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wesley is not that weak. He would not have begged Angelus to rape him. Story is OOC, on Wesley's part. Angelus is an SOB and that's right, but Wesley? I didn't see him in this story. Andlly,lly, I would find it hard to believe that ANY character (with very few exceps) ws) would behave like he did because it's very bizarre and unrealistic.
schedule March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent, everything I expected and more. Good job.