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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story the first time around, when it was still a one shot (I don't have a clue as to why I didn't leave a praising review back then, too), and now seeing it continued is as delightful as having christmas, birthday and halloween all at once.
Your writing style is as addictive and immersive as ever, carrying the story with beautiful ease and constantly weaving great narrative with touching and tangible descriptions, making the reader both savour the text and be hungry to know what happens next. The plot and general ambience of the story are very nice and delivered wonderfully, with a pleasant feel that's sure to make the reader smile.
As far as characterizations go, I firmly believe that Sebastian is the best OC ever created. He's interesting, intriguing, endearing, charismatic and sexy, but still so very human with his flaws, despite how shallow a character such as him could turn out. His brilliant personality with his status and certain worldliness make a delicious contrast for Connor's developing and mature personality, as well as his darker frame of experience, and these boys compliment each other perfectly.
This is the kind of story that the reader will remember with fondness and a certain twinkle in the eye for years to come.
Your writing style is as addictive and immersive as ever, carrying the story with beautiful ease and constantly weaving great narrative with touching and tangible descriptions, making the reader both savour the text and be hungry to know what happens next. The plot and general ambience of the story are very nice and delivered wonderfully, with a pleasant feel that's sure to make the reader smile.
As far as characterizations go, I firmly believe that Sebastian is the best OC ever created. He's interesting, intriguing, endearing, charismatic and sexy, but still so very human with his flaws, despite how shallow a character such as him could turn out. His brilliant personality with his status and certain worldliness make a delicious contrast for Connor's developing and mature personality, as well as his darker frame of experience, and these boys compliment each other perfectly.
This is the kind of story that the reader will remember with fondness and a certain twinkle in the eye for years to come.
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...
Well, this was exceptionally yummy....
I'd love to see more, because Connor is my fav. character and I always feel that he never gets enough fan-love.
Please post soon!
Well, this was exceptionally yummy....
I'd love to see more, because Connor is my fav. character and I always feel that he never gets enough fan-love.
Please post soon!
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it tell Cordy came into play
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! I read it a while back and I love rereading it. I want more, a sequel or something.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS! I want you to make a FULL BLOWN SEQUEL PLZ! I'm BEGGING YOU! I love Seb and Conner together! MORE PLZ, MORE! lol,PLZ?! Byes^_^ Update Medcial Attention also plz!
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
right well this was most definatly one of the hottest fics i have ever read. and believe me i've read a lot of them. try like 3yrs times 45 hrs per week worth of reading. and thank u so f*cking much for NOT making this several chapters long and making me beg for the ending. luv u lots.