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for Manchild

by Rina76

person FaithB
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooohh love it!!!
Please dont say your gonna stop it there!!! Please have the meeting of Seb and Angel!!! I loooovvveee this fic!!!!
person LynZ
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so cute!
I was kinda expecting Angel to be kicking down Seb's door the minute Connor told him he was dating an older man, but the end result was just as cute... especially the bit about crying.
Can't wait for their next date!
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! I really want to see Seb on top though in bed...
person Buho
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. It was so worth the wait. I did a little double take when I saw that this was updated. Thanks for the little shout out as well.
"This kiss is different to any they have given each other; not a prelude to passion but a pledge of faithfulness, trust, honour and loyalty,..." - Easily one of the best lines you have produced in this story. I love how you developed both Connor's and Seb's personalities in this chapter. To tell you the truth if you end it right here, I would be ok with that. Having Connor reach that new level with his relationship with Angel was beautifully done. So again I am ok with you ending the story here, but I truly hope you continue. I just enjoy this story so much.
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away tears* oh man that was the most wonderful heartwrenching chapter ever. I loved it, I love this story and I CANNOT wait for the update. oh man Conner and Seb are so cute...and i can't wait for Angel's reaction (although we all know he's fucking Spike through the bed right now...mmm) great job I can't wait for more!
person Buho
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
By far one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading on this site. I can't wait for you to continue on.
person cass
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
arghhh with angel now your just teasing me
is it wrong i am so addicted to this story i screamed when i saw it was updated
cant wait for angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LynZ
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man.. you almost gave me a heart attack when Connor was gonna leave... but I'm glad that everything worked out okay-ish. Th second chapter was nicely fluffy and you didn't overdo the dramatic too much.
Lookign forward to the next installment... wonder how Angel's gonna react?
person cass
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooo
plz update soon
person Suzaku24
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic so far...you have got to get another chapter in soon...XD