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for Corporate Bitch

by Connor

person trish
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this fic . i love reading s/a hardcore bdsm stories. when are u going to update? hopefully soon?!!!
person Captain Grammar
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't use an apostrophe where an 's' is added merely to make a noun plural. The apostrophe is used either to indicate the possessive or that a letter is missing eg

you're = you are

Spike's coat = the coat belonging to Spike

Spike's pissed = Spike is pissed
person Ardent
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never would happen, but who cares! More, please. I like seeing Spike with the upper hand. I don't want Angel to suffer too much, let him enjoy himself, but Spike as dominant is great.
person AMM
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi I really like your story. Don't see to many Spike/Angel story where Spike is the one on top. You did a great job writing the second part. LOL SPIKE'S PUSSY. Yep that's Angel alright.