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Great stury! I thought it was cute n__n

Very interesting. The story is like any other I have read but it's very interesting. Your very creative in your writting and I can't wait for more.

I find the concept of the story really interesting and I?ll look forward to see what?ll happen next. The only thing I can say that is not of all good is that the story seam to move a little too fast forward. The storytelling is a little jumpy, but then again that could just be me and my tired eyes. How close to the canon are you going to keep this, in that I mean of the whole Gunn situation, with his upgrade of his brain?

Keep going...