rate_review Reviews

I think Cordy's gonna need the divine patience she got when she elevated to a Higher Being, coz he's just stupider than dirt. How could he leave one woman and go fight over another? Oi, that's just bad form. Very bad. Cordy needs a really big 2x4 also. He deserves a beating.

This story continues to flesh out the trouble with Angel. He's stubborn and frustrating and wrongly believes that his beliefs are the right beliefs, always. Spike got the shanshu, Spike got the girl - get over it! Angel doesn't even want Buffy any longer. Cordelia keeps hitting him with a verbal bat, and it's not making a dent. How long can she keep at him? It's frustrating, but very entertaining and well written. One quibble - there's a typo, using the word advert rather than avert in the passage about Spike averting an apocalypse. Other than that, this was an excellent chapter.

Oh please oh please, you SOOOOO have to keep writing!!!!!
I NEED to know what's going to happen next!!!

alriht, now with the res of the feedback:
I love the way you portrayed (I'm not suure if that's how it's spelled) Connor! I hate the way some people write him as this little brat wen there is obviously more to that, and you managed to touch his problems without much description, and it was wonderfully done
Spike human??? Angel is right, there has to be some evil spell behind that! *grrr* (I'm not grrying your fic, I think it's wonderful when writers are able to make readers -me- feel different kind of emotions)
Love the way you are writing Buffy and Angel, I still can't figure out which one of them is acting more childish
Yahoo! Cordy's back!

may I make a little requst? retty please??? *coughcoughwritemoreSMUTcoughcough*

Anyway, please update soon, the waiting is killing me!!!! (((and a dead reader can't read!!!!)))

After reading a great story like Daylight I realize this is a continuation Angels pov. You had me in Daylight . You write well and have my imagination already. Write on I will be there.

Go Addie okay some of it rehash from Daylight but necessary for a pov yet you got the point across. Plot is excellent still in cadence with Buffy and Angel storyline. Best writing yet. Thumbs up

Finally found the unedited version. Maybe it's because I'm such a Spuffy fan and I've read so many more of those stories that they don't seem weird anymore, but it's rather weird reading Cordy get her kink on. Other than that, still liking the new side to the coin. Which after reading that sentence, makes it seem that I didn't actual like that part, when it's more a matter of just not being used to Cordy in the sex situations. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh I hope that wasn't all in Angel's head. Did Cordy speak the truth? about his soul not being in any danger? It kinda erks me how hung up about Buffy he (Angel) seam to be. will things take turn for the better for him soon? Hey, maybe Angel and Cordy set out on their own, after all they don't really need the others - that's my oppinion and I don't perticullary like they way they treat Angel. What's the story with Cordy? is she still more then she seam to be - still working for the Powers? is there some hidden agenda the PTB or some other have cook for Angel or have they decided that he isn't worth the effort? I'll loke forward to see where you take this.

Silvi

Is it Angel still or is it Angelus? HHHHmmmmmmm. Lovely update, thank you so very much for sharing it with the rest of us. Interesting to see the events of Daylight sort of twisted and turned in someways and from a different perspective. Even if it's Angel's. . . . .

I care, alright- you had best keep writing!

Kick butt job. I love the two sides of the tale we get.