rate_review Reviews

Delicious story in all aspects.

Sorry you weren't getting the reviews you wanted. I just found this fic and thought I would let you know that I would love a sequel (is there one already, and if so what and where.) I liked where you went with this story.

I just found this story, and think you did a wonderful job. It is one of my favorite Angel stories.

I liked it. Im usually not a fan of Angel/Cordy but i liked this one.

Thanks for the C/A fic! They're getting harder and harder to find. While I'm not a fan at all of Angel from "Chosen" through S5 (the retcon was just too unbelievable), I think you dealt with his behavior and his reasons for the whole Buffy blindness well. I wish you had tossed Cordy in there in the list of those who died because of him (not just Wes and Fred) because it felt too much like S5 all over again with the complete lack of mention, remorse and grief over Cordy's coma and then death. But I can't complain too much because you did manage to bring her back and finally have him admit he loved her.

I very much liked what you did with Connor and the breakdown of his whole world once W&H was toppled. I thought the simple way they approached his regaining his memories on the show was a copout, so it was great to see the torment he must have felt tackled in a more realistic manner.

Thanks again, and I hope you write more C/A!

Chapter 5. Heh, finally getting to some fun stuff, not repeats of Daylight. And I very much like Cordelia chewing bubble gum and kicking ass.

Chapter 6. Angel is so thick it's unbelievable. Did he really think that Spike's new body was made from the dust particles that constituted his old one?

It was a sweet story.

in ur dawn/conner fic do u have the restoration of connor and angel's relationship or is that just a given. Thanks for the terrific fic!

I love Doyle, so glad you used him to help the thickheaded *cough* vampire to see reason. Nice scene between Angel and Cordy and he actually like, gave in that scene. . . nice work