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GREAT STORY! i really loved it. i liked the twist at the end. i mean you made Gunn seem so normal and then BAM he's the bad guy. that was really awesome. i loved how you made Lindsey all jealous cause Liam's got William and there's NO WAY Lindsey could get William... hopefully that is cause this is a series and who knows what turns it'll take. there's gonna be more right? hopefully because you can't just leave it like this. okay i'm done. Write more please.

I've tried to leave a review three times now but this stupid site has not saved it yet. I was only able to read the first part of the story so far. I tried to get to the second but again the site timed me out over and over and over. Anyway, I enjoyed what I was able to read. I love what you did with Spike especially!

Loved the conclusion to this you you majorly got me by surprise with the whole evil Gunn bit. Fabulous!