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for We Help The Helplessly Guilty

by JDavitt

person angelkitty77
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is so good please continue. great story line
person Toraoh
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I really like where this is going, I hope you will continue the story. :)
person a friend
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not bad. i believe i've seen some of your work before. you've certainly improved. you're quite bold to write like an original lemon. good job.