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I read in one of your A/Ns that you were up to chapter 95 now. Can I read the rest of it? Would you tell me where to find it? I have read this story so many times, a little one place a little another but never all of it. Would "pretty please" help?

Oh man I can't believe there's not more. Please tell me your finishing this. Or better yet have finished and are going to update a lot really really soon.

It has been awhile since I have come back to this story. I had hoped there would be something new, but alas, no luck. I hope that you have not abandoned it. If it is continued somewhere else, would you please let me know. It always holds the attention, no matter how many times I have read it before.

mendenbar
m.ringe@insightbb.com

I have to say that out of all your stories this one has to be the best and I am surprised that it has not received more reviews. The only thing that I can come up with is that without the show still showing interest has slowly began to fade.

At any rate one of the things that I really love about this story is that you have taken the time to create a much deeper culture to the vampire?s life style than what was offered in the original shows. The whole story all falls neatly into the story line without making it feel like an alternate universe even if it has fallen away from the original shows. It flows very smoothly so that in reading the story it feels like a logical place for the universe to travel.

You have taken time with all the character development as well which I applaud you on. You have not rushed the characters to make them fit into the story, rather you have made the story fit around the characters. Keeping everyone in character as they have to deal with a new obstacle can be difficult, however, you have done it quite well. You have highlighted different personality aspects that Angel has always fought with, allowing him to remain burdened by his soul (therefore still caring about the humans about him) but letting the demon have a bit more rein and in effect making him that much more dangerous.

I am intrigued to read more about Doyle and this new development as well as the continuing sexual tension between Oz and Spike. When is Oz going to finally give in to his own desires? Soon I hope. (-:

I didn?t mean for this to turn into some kind of essay but there was quite a bit I wanted to say. I hope that you continue with this story as I really look forward to reading more to see where everything will end up. This story is really turning out to be an epic one that has no real end which I love. You are not just giving the characters one obstacle to simply overcome but changing the rules by which they live and fight the world of evil.

Skyla

"That's another fine mess you got us into, Ollie!" Eternal son and his consort!!? Can't wait to see Cordelia's reaction to that. Or Doyle's for that matter. Or Xander, Riley and Graham's. Whee! It have been awhile, but when does Maggie Walsh get her comeuppance? And what about Drusilla and her thralls, surely they will show up on the scene soon. Please don't forget this story.

yay! You updated! I look forward to the next part!

This is just awesome. Can't wait to read more. Riley Graham Xander and Angel all in one yummy package. And now with Doyle thrown into the mix. I don't think I could ask for more. Well, maybe I could ask. :)

Wow. I read all of this in a matter of 4 hours. I am proud of myself.

I really love this story. Very good plot, and great couplings.

Please update again, please?

I'm always so excited to see an update for this story. It's really a wonderful plot idea and I've enjoyed your writing thoroughly- I know I never would have pulled this off so well. ^^

I look forward to see what you have coming for the boys.

hi there, still loving every minute of it and can't wait to see what happens next...keep it coming!