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by kleysa

person chelsea
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you should continue that story, it was so weird. but really erotic. is it wrong to like it?
schedule May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know I've asked you to do this before, Ayla, but I have to join the crowd and do it again. Please, write two more chapters of this. :)
person lakrn
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool! do more!
person dueNorth
schedule April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bollocks! I meant so long as Andrew and Jonathan AREN'T as evil as Warren. Everything else still stands. :)
person dueNorth
schedule April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ehrm... interesting.

I'm all for you writing more, so long as Andrew and Jonathan are evil... as evil as Warren. More funny banter from the good two-thirds of the troika. Oh and Willow eventually skins Warren (again). That'd be beautiful.

If you make Buffy enjoy herself whilst being raped again, unless it's some sort of Stockholm Syndrome twist, I'll find you and vomit on your bed.
person Sasha
schedule February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do more with the other two and I'll be happy. *g* Very good, I liked it.
person shadow fox
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad - Dont know if I would want it continued with the other two - that is squishy - but Warren def is evil so can see this.
person Jouliana
schedule January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool! write more!