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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow i'm dying to know what happens next please continue
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! You should keep on it!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this!! I really, really, really hope that you continue soon!!! I'm looking forward to some more hot and heavy scenes between Warren and Buffy :P I love this idea and I think you're a great writer as well and this fic is too good not to continue, leaving it alone would be a real shame! Hope you write more soon!!!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, c'mon Ayla, how many reviewers have to beg you to continue? This story's awesome! I like how Warren keeps focusing Buffy's attention back on her body. Nevermind that he is dangerous and has no right to touch her, once she is thinking about whether or not it's enjoyable, she's reacting to him. Buffy's embarrassment and panic just add to the intensity of her sensations. The fact that he keeps talking to her, taunting her, and expecting answers keeps her from finding a quiet place in her head and shutting him out. Very nicely done.
I haven't seen much Slayer, but I wouldn't think sex is generally very fulfilling for her, unless it contains a certain struggle for dominance and the threat of deadly peril. After saving the world a few times, I just don't think going all the way is the same big deal it is for most teenage girls. Unless, of course, she's sleeping with the Big Bad. Or whatever. As invincible and confident as Buffy is, I don't think anything could have gotten her attention as thoroughly as being forced did.
Owning up, though, I also really enjoyed that this was Buffy/WARREN, of all people. Considering how much she and the gang despised the troika, it makes sense that she underestimated their abilities. I can't wait to see what you do with Andrew. Heh, after all those times she called him a virgin ... so ironic. Everyone knows Warren's dangerous, but it's going to rankle to be just as vulnerable around his young sidekick. Try explaining that to the rest of the Scoobies.
Please keep writing.
I haven't seen much Slayer, but I wouldn't think sex is generally very fulfilling for her, unless it contains a certain struggle for dominance and the threat of deadly peril. After saving the world a few times, I just don't think going all the way is the same big deal it is for most teenage girls. Unless, of course, she's sleeping with the Big Bad. Or whatever. As invincible and confident as Buffy is, I don't think anything could have gotten her attention as thoroughly as being forced did.
Owning up, though, I also really enjoyed that this was Buffy/WARREN, of all people. Considering how much she and the gang despised the troika, it makes sense that she underestimated their abilities. I can't wait to see what you do with Andrew. Heh, after all those times she called him a virgin ... so ironic. Everyone knows Warren's dangerous, but it's going to rankle to be just as vulnerable around his young sidekick. Try explaining that to the rest of the Scoobies.
Please keep writing.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue and add Anderw and Jonothan.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to write more!!!!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. It was great. I hope you'll make a sequel. You rock!!! Keep up the good work.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was gross, Warren, ewww. I so much rather see Buffy with Spike or Angel. I like this fic though, even though Warren was in it(I'm not a big fan of him) If you write more, I will read it.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please make some more and please add spike!!! love the story it's awesome but make buffy have more control and be more helpless!